Compose a short paragraph about one of the given topics while utilizing one of the following literary devices.
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Jessica
2/4/2020 14:48:25
In the morning I refuse to open my eyes, and get out of bed, and chase the clock, and supplement my body, and excercise my brain, and look relatively presentable, and get in my car, and go to school.
Johann Dy
2/4/2020 14:49:04
Topic: Psychological Torture
Xx EdgeL0rd xX
2/5/2020 08:52:00
R/im14andthisisdeep
Gabriel S.
2/4/2020 14:50:07
Barely letting the bed bugs bite is bitter in the morning
Skye
2/4/2020 14:51:39
When thinking in terms of psychological torture a prolonged period of mental strain can be seen in polysyndeton. POlysndeton act as a slow prolonged way to say something that has an alternative in which the same thing can be said “faster”
Jason
2/4/2020 14:52:11
Eight a.m. and the sun just peaked over the mountain, birds harmonizing, snow settled, sky cloudless, the most perfect day for skiing.
Noah
2/4/2020 14:53:00
The cat was fat and hairy and long and dumb and hunrgry and wanted to go outside and was hot and went inside and ate and drank water and grew old and had kids and got sick and died.
Jolean
2/4/2020 14:53:29
I don’t want to go to school,and write my notes, and highlight text, and read my books, and finish my projects, and solve math problems.
Dia Ayoubi
2/4/2020 14:54:27
Mornings are bright and brilliant.
christine (ง •_•)ง
2/4/2020 14:54:55
I grudged and sighed as I entered the building. Hallways crowded with sadness and backpacks and anxiety and frustration and fear over the day to come. One might expect to hear the sounds of anguish in hell but alas, the school was filled with a symphony of cries and harsh whispers and mutters of curses and the occasional moments of silence. Even the most experienced of torturers can't compare to the immense brain damage gained from listening to the same old slogans and mottos and words of praise by the underpaid and understaffed. But in the end, its just another day.
Kay
2/6/2020 14:54:50
You have used polysyndeton very effectively.
Yessica
2/4/2020 14:55:01
The beautiful sunrise was absolutely beautiful, the rooster crowed, the birds chirped, the dog stretched, and meanwhile the human barely opening their eyes. The morning breeze brought life to all living things, bringing smile to faces and tears to many. Bright colors slowly crawling across the sky, shifting and shaping into the sky. The day starts and activities begin, everyone taking part of their roles to this earth.
Kay
2/6/2020 14:58:27
“Bright colors slowly crawling across the sky, shifting and shaping into the sky” is beautifully put while employing consonance and alliteration.
Ezequiel Villegas
2/4/2020 14:55:34
The famous quote “Veni, Vidi, Vici” shows the identity of Julius Ceaser, the quote shows how Ceaser was a ma that wanted power to himself. The way he gained that power was by gaining enemies land to show power.
Radman
2/4/2020 14:55:41
Me and my friends sat around the bonfire unit morning we talked and laughed. After a couple of hours everybody went home we all bonded.
Noe G.
2/4/2020 14:55:48
Braulio Hernandez
2/4/2020 14:56:01
Sometimes the authors use alliteration to represent a strong sense of identity. This is going to put an enfasis to a name or something meaningful about the character or thing. An example of this could be, the name of “Peter Piper Pizza” as you already know people are really familiar with this brand and the entertainment that is giving. The alliteration used in the brand’s name make you repeat it several times in your head which relates to a psychological of advertising.
Chloe
2/4/2020 14:56:15
As soon i wake up to the alarming sound of my 6:00 alarm, i already feel the frustration of having to get it of bed, get dressed and walk into a unwanted place. This place is somewhere that education is known to be good, although when I attend this education i feel nothing but psychological torture i feel as if my brain is burnt to a crisp. I tend every class period with different subjects, i try and try to gain the knowledge of things I don’t know but its to hard to bare to learn.
Luis Guzman
2/4/2020 14:56:34
Physiological torture is used or illustrated asydeton by when she is in th cell and she says she beating up and when they use and and and, those are some examples of physical torture
Michael
2/4/2020 14:56:40
Morning
Christian lopez
2/4/2020 14:57:58
Identity/allusion- every person has a specific identity for what they are doing, for example, when you are with your parents, you are like a Christian boy/girland you are on your best behavior. When you are at school, you act the way you choose to be And you and do things that you like to do and portray yourself however you want
Addisyn de la Rosa
2/4/2020 14:59:02
In the morning, Jane wanted to wake up early and take a shower and get dressed and eat breakfast and prepare for school so she wouldn’t be late. On her way to school, she remembered she forgot her math and science and history homework, and went back home to get it and was late to school and got lunch detention and missed half of first period.
arley
2/4/2020 14:59:41
a boy and his girlfriend got in a fight, but later that day the boy got a gift for his girlfriend, when she opened it she gasped as it was glowing like glitter and gave the boy a great big hug, they both bonded greatly together afterwards.
Victoria Cervantes
2/4/2020 14:59:49
In the morning the sun was shining so bright it could be seen through the curtains, birds chirping to a melody coming from the bakery down the street, people out side walking up and down the street. In the morning the air had a crisp feel to it and along withv the thought that winter was over hung in the air. With every one on their wat to work and buying coffe I had the time to people watch and enjoy my morning. Sitting in a bench near the park and drinking the coffe i picked up on the way I brought out my sketch book.
Krystal Leal
2/4/2020 15:00:26
Identity
Yasmin
2/4/2020 15:00:55
The big beautiful blue sk morning with the sun shinny rays.
Victoria Zambrano
2/4/2020 15:04:43
The sun peeked through the sheer curtains of my bedroom. The birds seem to sing and serenade and shout that “morning has returned!”. It feels useless to get out of bed, but I stagger towards the window to block the blinding beams of light that bother me from my backyard. After doing so, I flop back into bed, only to realize that it’s past 8:30 AM and no point in going to school.
Francisco ibarra
2/4/2020 15:05:02
I don’t like how the school takes away what students want putting a new logo to sell new students and parents that there are new things but their isn’t non. Even though putting new classes to expand our options in what we want they have ruined the options for students in the school already by taking away what we liked but the allusions they make us see is that you will have no trouble, no struggle, but really this program means nothing more because not all the colleges accept what we have.
Derrick Reyna
2/5/2020 08:46:56
Mornings are stressful and tiring
Tyler
2/5/2020 08:47:30
Peter piper pizza is a form of alliteration that allows the brand to be recognized more often
Mariah
2/5/2020 08:48:31
The morning is filled with mild air, meadows and lots of married couples
Derrick reyna
2/5/2020 08:49:04
Mondays are moisty and marvelous
Hope
2/5/2020 08:49:57
Bonding with people can be hard but as long as you try and are fearless and happy and encouraged you will find the best bond.
Mario
2/5/2020 08:50:17
Mornings arem hard like wood
Julia Rodriguez
2/5/2020 08:50:36
We are outside, standing in the middle of his yard. My eyes shift over to see his gorgeous green eyes look at something beyond what we can see. He doesn’t look back me, so I stare. In that moment, I feel myself commit to him, trust him, comfort him, love him. In that moment, I realize I love him more than the sun that Rises every morning, the wind that tickles my face, the earth that keeps me upright, the sky that gives me no limit. I love him.
Severo
2/5/2020 08:51:24
Mornings are super short and stressful, stars going in sun cuming out sun going in
Ely
2/5/2020 08:51:55
Merry mornings are like the sun on a bright day
XD
2/5/2020 08:52:42
Gimmick your toes
Crystal S
2/5/2020 08:53:02
Bonding comes naturally to us since we are social creatures, there’s nothing that can compare to the small talks between strangers, the giggles of children, the loud laughs of best friends, the loving embraces of couples, and the chuckles from old friends.
Max.j
2/5/2020 08:53:27
Life is hitting hard at me
Ever
2/5/2020 08:54:00
MONDAYS ARE DUMB
Squurle
2/6/2020 14:45:27
Why tho
Mario Trevino III
2/5/2020 08:54:32
Make your morning a marvelous muse
Nancy
2/5/2020 08:54:54
Morning mist, most mourning mellows. Made meeting merely mournful
Gerardo Aguillon
2/5/2020 08:56:14
Mornings are heavy hectic
Joshua S.
2/5/2020 08:57:29
Meet the morning, sleeping moon, changing mood, morning morning
Julia Z
2/5/2020 08:57:41
In the morning the sun begins to rise and the sun rays begin to peak through the blinds. It’s quiet but not so quiet because you can hear the ocean waves crashing against each other. The smell of pancakes begin to fill the house.
Emma
2/5/2020 08:59:12
Waking up on a monday morning feeling the marvelous sun approach me.
Joe
2/5/2020 09:00:37
Mornings are mysteriously manifested many make up the day shine until dawn comes upon and now the day is gone
Jannie Herrera
2/5/2020 09:02:07
Every person has a specific identity, sometimes it varies depending on the location. When we are surrounded by people that think highly of us we tend to act well behaved,but when we find ourselves with it friend we act more goofy, its all in our identity depending on who we are surrounded by.
Jennifer Gomez
2/5/2020 09:10:33
The chirping birds and bright sun bursting through the window. The bright arrays reflecting through the curtains into my room. Giving hope to start a great day.
Santiago C
2/6/2020 08:46:51
Winston decided to take on the Herculean task of taking down the party.
Casey Colyer
2/6/2020 08:53:09
It is easy to get into, hard to get out of, what is it?
Casey
2/6/2020 08:55:01
The answer is my bed nothing more :)
Santiago C
2/6/2020 08:53:56
Topic: Identity
Casey
2/6/2020 08:55:12
Due to the nightmare I call school I have mental breakdowns and nights of crying and the constant fear of failing and I wonder if one day this will be all worth it.
Raul
2/6/2020 11:12:51
Chill lets play cod
Jessica S
2/6/2020 08:56:01
I wake up and get ready go and meet new people and make new friends and get new experiences.
Pedro B
2/6/2020 08:56:12
Let them walk the path of darkness and lies and wrong and chaos and fear and death and terror and evil, I will follow the light, the path of courage and justice, the path of dreams that lift us and the path of freedom and life and power.
Pedro Velasquez
2/6/2020 08:56:48
A birthday girl in the morning and with friends and balloons and songs and food and joy and gifts and complements and cake and a step closer to death.
pedro b again
2/6/2020 08:58:42
I walk a lonely road, the only road that I have ever known, don't know where it goes, but I walk the road, and I walk alone jejejejejej
San Juana Reyna
2/6/2020 08:59:09
We must do anything that has to be done, achieve any goals, turn in any works, gain any knowledge, object any rival that stands in front of achievement.
Itzel Bahena
2/6/2020 11:08:46
In the morning I wake up to my alarm turn it off and get ready. I brush my teeth and brush my hair and put my clothes on and put my shoes on and eat my breakfast and them go to school.
Itzel
2/6/2020 11:16:32
Then**
Jenae
2/6/2020 11:10:05
Morning start at 6:40 and stay in bed til 7:00 i look in the mirror and wash my face to wake up more, i get dressed and put on my shoes to start my day, i walk out into the morning dew and get in my car and drive to my doom.
Raul Cortez
2/6/2020 11:11:56
So you don’t brush your teeth or get dressed good job buddy wake up and go
Raul cortez
2/6/2020 11:10:29
Wake up grab my gun while i brush my teeth and use the restroom and shoot through the door because i hear a noise and then open the door and found out i shot my dog.
Noe
2/6/2020 11:10:40
Sunny sand sunny Said sunny sat sunny sailed sunny stoped.
Andrey Pena
2/6/2020 11:11:42
I wish i was smart like others, And strong, and willing to stay up long nights and suffer through hours of studying, and drive the long cold drive to school. I wish i was motivated.
Glenn Quezada
2/6/2020 11:13:33
Classes go by fast and i cant seen to grasp any of the knowledge the teachers are trying to give me.
Carlo vento
2/6/2020 11:14:24
i woke up late and missed the bus and did not go to school and missed an assignment and a test.
Derek Gomez
2/6/2020 11:14:42
Every morning, there is always a routine that the average American high school student follows. Usually, the average American high school students wake up early, get dressed, eat breakfast, pack their backpacks, put their backpack in the car, drive to school, arrive to school to receive a high school education, repeat the process. Millions of students, usually from Monday through Friday, are accustomed to this routine.
Andrea Pena
2/6/2020 11:14:48
The cold came in through the door leaving the children freezing in their beds, sill fast sleeping, the mother watching them sleep in the darkest room in the house, the oldest child being afraid of the people that might hurting the younger siblings at night.
Anaely
2/6/2020 11:15:11
He’s mean and evil and ugly and is a bad tempered person. He’s also my younger brother. 2/6/2020 11:16:00
Can cheese crunch on my chest?
Edgar Rodriguez
2/6/2020 11:16:16
Anxious for the future, to reach the peak of the mountain , being an adult, making my own, not realizing the predators on top
Larissa
2/6/2020 11:17:00
Wake up, drag yourself out of bed, dread the day that is to come, walk into a place where you feel unprepared, do work that seems meaningless, worry about grades that will decide your future, go home, do it all over again.
Patricio
2/6/2020 11:17:09
The psychological torture of having to wake up every week earlier than the sun the sun rises is hard on the soul
Pamela
2/6/2020 16:28:40
If you asked a student who had no experience with the term psychological torture to compare it to something they’re familiar with, it’s almost foreshawdowing their response; school. Leave a Reply. |
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