Compose a short paragraph describing one of the following topics while employing one of the following literary devices.
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Gabriel S
2/6/2020 14:49:36
One of the themes in 1984 is language and communication and the theme itself is a paradox is a paradox because there is language but it’s only limited. It’s not proper language where you get to freely express your thoughts and emoti9ons.
Skye
2/6/2020 14:52:13
1984 makes various parallels that relate to the ministries and the censorship as seen within the society. J
Jessica
2/6/2020 14:56:05
Not gonna lie, the parallels are essential though.
Jessica
2/6/2020 14:54:44
The season of fall/Juxtaposition
Skye
2/6/2020 14:56:30
ngl.. this is pretty good doe
Johann Dy
2/6/2020 14:56:47
Topic: Feeling Out of Place
Omegalul
2/7/2020 09:36:05
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Kay
2/7/2020 09:36:16
The close placement of opposite ideas or words is called ANTITHESIS, which is very similar to OXYMORON.
christine ψ(._. )>
2/6/2020 14:57:24
It was the best of times, it was the worst of times. How could there be so many people and yet no one? How could the nonexistent, quiet voices of my head be so loud? It will never cease to be funny over how sad it is. Their curses of praise. Their shouting of whispers. Their laughs of frustration. This is the most serious joke of my life. The gift that won't stop cursing.
Kay
2/7/2020 09:37:51
Thank you for using both literary allusion and paradox.
Yessica
2/6/2020 14:57:34
In the corner in a room full of people, so much noise so much activity but only hearing deafening silence roaring in your ears. Feeling like all eyes are on you when there is only you and your spot light, your dark light. The loneliness is bittersweet, it feels good for only moment until you are in a room full of people and seem to be the extra piece in the puzzle.
Kay
2/7/2020 09:38:49
Double oxymora!
Jolean
2/6/2020 14:58:09
In a classroom full of students focused on their work I was working on my assignment clearly confused. I felt different from the class every person understood what to do yet I was lost.
Kay
2/7/2020 09:40:05
Your use of “clearly confused” demonstrates your crystal clear understanding of the content.
Noah
2/6/2020 14:58:18
Sadly I was happy that my ice cream cone fell on the floor because I was trying to eat healthy. At that moment I felt out of place because the rest of my friend group judged me by my diet. I quietly screamed, “leave me alone dude” hoping that they would accept my fatness.
Kay
2/7/2020 09:41:21
A humorous portrayal of a person caught between bodily desire and social desire!
Zeke Villegas
2/6/2020 15:00:24
Feeling out of place is a common of many people. They are clearly confused about what is surrounding themselves. There is nothing visible in which they see that they like.
Michael
2/6/2020 15:00:39
In 1984 language and communication is used as a paradox as each new edition is published for the public to see. Which means that language becomes more limited every time a new editon is published for the sake of the public having the inability to express themselves more freely to one another.
Dia
2/6/2020 15:00:57
With power you become unstoppable and unstable.
Yasmin
2/6/2020 15:01:06
Even though I’m around people I still feel lonely
Braulio Hernandez
2/6/2020 15:01:11
Sometimes I feel Iike I are on a different world but actually I am just living reality. It’s like if we were zoned out spiritually but we our body is still on the path of hell.
Radman
2/6/2020 15:01:19
In the season of fall we get to see the trees dying changing colors but even though they are dying they still look beautiful
Addisyn
2/6/2020 15:01:24
The season of fall brings about its beautiful colored leaves that fill the ground, but winter follows brings its smokey looking clouds filled with water ready to pour on us.
Jason
2/6/2020 15:01:35
The use of paradox seemingly contradicts the statement, for example, I am nobody, wise fool, and your friends enemy is your enemy. These contradict themselves to emphasize the statement. Many authors use this so that they can acquire a better tone of the book.
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2/6/2020 15:01:41
This feeling lead me to big brother because he knows the truth and he will end my suffering.
Lul
2/7/2020 09:37:06
Damn bro you good
Victoria
2/6/2020 15:02:17
The feeling of being out of place is some what bitter sweet. You get this sensation of being in and out of life with a nagging feeling that you don’t belong always following you. No matter what you do the deafening silence is always there. In the comfort of your home however it seems like one might belong but why not out and about?
Christian lopez
2/6/2020 15:02:23
Juxtaposition/the season of fall- as the leaves fall to the ground and the Trees start to look bare, the plants and trees will look greener,healthier, and bigger in the spring
Luis Guz
2/6/2020 15:02:28
Feeling or being out of place and oxymoron are being used in 1984 are displayed in a way easy to understand by him feeling left out or being at the wrong place at th wrong time
Chloe
2/6/2020 15:03:09
dead leaves hang on the leaving tree, isolated with showers of reds oranges and yellows, Colors so bright they comfort your unconfurting heart.
Francisco Ibarra
2/6/2020 15:03:25
Some how in this world we all feel like vanished, obscured, drained but we show that we re strong, happy, and smart.
arley
2/6/2020 15:27:56
the unique smell of leaves
Kay
2/7/2020 11:23:41
This is a very nice olfactory imagery.
Victoria Zambrano
2/6/2020 15:40:45
The silence and solitude I loathed yet depended on was interrupted by the sudden burst of laughter in the library. The small crowd shouted and screamed in a place that is supposed to be silent. They give me stares of slight disgust, and I notice I’m occupying a seat they’ve attempted to save for another. I feel understand the cue to leave because I know when I am not wanted.
Kay
2/7/2020 11:29:51
Juxtaposition and alliteration aptly portray your feelings.
Ever
2/7/2020 09:32:58
Too much power is bad.
Derrick Reyna
2/7/2020 09:34:34
Feeling or being out of place being used in 1984 are displayed in a way easy to understand by him feeling left out or doesn’t belong in that certain place he was in.
Crystal S
2/7/2020 09:35:29
Season of Fall/Juxtaposition
Kay
2/7/2020 11:31:00
This is a very effective use of juxtaposition.
Mariah
2/7/2020 09:37:59
Ive become so accustomed to feeling alone or feeling out of place. Almost like its second hand nature. The laying in bed in the loud silence ate me up from the inside out. Loneliness covering me up with blankets of silence and pillows trying to accompany the emptiness. The cotton puffs tried to comfort me but never achieved it. In the end I still feel lonely.
Kay
2/7/2020 11:32:17
An effective use of oxymoron and personification
Julia Z
2/7/2020 09:39:08
Feeling out of place is a common feeling amongst teenagers. Especially during high school because of all the different cliques there are.
Gerardo Aguillon
2/7/2020 09:39:40
Living in a world of perfection yet with several errors makes it reality.
Nancy
2/7/2020 09:39:49
The orange simmers of light that stray and dance between the leaves make the golden sun a warm glow of home.
Kay
2/7/2020 11:33:15
Very poetic!
Joshua
2/7/2020 09:41:16
When people clearly don’t understand once suffering, life becomes only assumptions and anticipated pleasures. Ones out of place is a perfectly understanding of one in need. In 1984, Winston is seems to be stuck in his own paradoxical life style in which he Is force to live with.
Jannie Herrera
2/7/2020 09:42:40
/The silence grows louder, is considered an oxymoron since the placement of opposite words are being utilize
Kay
2/7/2020 11:34:52
The silence grew louder . . .
Mario Trevino
2/7/2020 09:43:38
The happines we all long for isnt happines we need we all want to be loved and givedn attention b y someone to know that they care but what wse need to is seek not others love and affection b ut our own
Emma
2/7/2020 09:43:46
Fall is here to bring peaceful death, as the decayed trees leave a new life to sprout.
Hope
2/7/2020 09:44:08
As i walked into class a burst of emptiness crashed across my body. Noticing that no one i knew was in there, the first day in class and full of students but with no familiar face. My past classes were full of people i knew but when i asked myself if i knew someone, i knew I wouldn’t. As the hours of class go by i feel out of place in my new school with mysterious people.
Julia Rodriguez
2/7/2020 09:45:02
I am sitting down, waiting for my friend, Mia, to come join me. She walks in, but another person accompanies her. I shake this new person’s hand and learn that her name is Jane. Throughout the concert, my best friend is a stranger, as Jane and Mia were chatting, laughing, and smiling- all without me. In that moment I’m hurting, fuming, and on the verge of crying. I was within a cluster of people, yet I felt like an outlier. I know no one would notice if I departed. So, I rise from my chair with a heavy weight on my shoulders and leave the auditorium feeling I hadn’t moved a muscle.
Ely
2/7/2020 09:46:11
Happiness doesn’t gaurentee happiness
Joe
2/7/2020 09:46:23
Sun is out and i feel cold, I’m surrounded by people but I feel alone, yeah :’)
Pedro
2/10/2020 08:38:38
obviously, war and peace are opposites, as are freedom and slavery. Ignorance and strength, though not exact opposites, can be contradictory ideas because ignorance is often tied to mental weakness. On one hand, these statements can be true in the world of 1984. Leave a Reply. |
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